Friday, April 7, 2017
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[Child and Mask, 1955 by Kaoru Kawano;
from Google dot com]
RICE CAKES
A smile rules the doll's house
A story now is told
Ever a cuddly audience
Assembled there to hear
The Buddha sits in silence
Rice cakes set in his plate
The sweet scents of incense
Rise to dissipate
When sticky little fingers
Of a urchin standing by
Edges close to Buddha's plate
His rice cakes to deplete
❧✿❧
garden Buddha
incense and birdsong
an offering
for ancestor's tales
retold in Spring buds
RICE CAKES© gillena cox 2017
Blog hopping today with
Kerry Says ~ Let's Paint a Picture
Kerry Gives the option to choose works from selected artists and write a new poem using the technique of Ekphrasis.
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Revisit
7th April 2015
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What a lovely choice of print.. I enjoyed both poems, verse and tanka breathed life into the picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Kerry
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I love the second poem especially.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Sherry
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Enchanting moments shared here.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Martin
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This is so sweet, and I love the print you've chosen for inspiration.
ReplyDeleteThanks De, happy you dropped in
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I really love the second part, especially the ending. It's like seeing spring blooming through the words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Magaly
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What Kerry said. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rosemary
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I've seen and maybe given those hungering glances at Buddha's offerings ~
ReplyDelete😊 thanks for dropping in grapeling
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I loved both the poems ❤️ you truly nailed the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa
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Both are beautiful writing, but I so love the second one.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Susan
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