TO WALK MORNINGS
Sweat nestles between my breast,
Drips down from hair to ear.
A crisp cut is hidden on the breeze,
Before the heat, sizzles brain cells.
Thinking expands: to clouds shared,
By me, by you, by everyone of us;
Whether we are out in the new sun,
Walking in old sneakers, or,
Planning to buy new ones.
So another day, when the car
Is parked at the mall,
Looking down on the scenic view,
Trying to click a photo,
Of the then setting sun,
Oh, but there's nor enough space
On the phone, too much data.
New sneakers have been bought
Nonetheless, for walking
In the crisp morning air.
And the sweat will nestle
Between my breast, and drip
From hair down to ear.
TO WALK MORNINGS © gillena cox 2016
Prompt Nights – A photograph is but a memory in raw format – [26]
“Whether he is an artist or not, the photographer is a joyous sensualist, for the simple reason that the eye traffics in feelings, not in thoughts.” – Walker Evans
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[my song choice for your listening enjoyment today]
I guess that is the problem with relying on a mechanical devise rather than developing a good memory. However, she is going to walk and gather some new material anyway. Nice Gillena
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Such a wonderful response to the prompt Gillena ❤💜 I too resonate with the idea of clicking pictures via phone and hoping there is enough data. Beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support ❤💜
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Happy you dropped in to read mine Sanaa
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I love my morning walks with my husband and my corgi. There's something nice about greeting the day with a bit of activity.
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Morning walks are the best. As you poem suggest, the senses are soaking everything in.
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Walking more so in the mornings will leave a sense of achievement. One is ahead of everyone else. Rightly so Gillena!
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morning walks heal...nice words Gillena...
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What a joyful trip full circle with you - despite the heat i can feel the happiness those new sneakers will bring..happy walking!
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What a delightful cameo of that walk in to town with you Gillena (probably cursing because you hadn't downloaded the pictures earlier to make more room!)
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A casual picture narrated so interestingly...loved this!
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What a wonderfully positive poem...I am smiling in your sunshine :D XXX
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I loved sharing your morning walk with you and I'm very familiar with the various frustrations of photography using whatever mode. I like how you bring us back to the beginning,,,
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