[Image 'Grande Anse Beach' from yahoo dot com]
A SNIPPET OF THREE CITIES
I
Leaving Scarborough, when you stopped by the women selling the benne balls, they smiled with you a welcoming smile, though you were leaving to get on the boat to go back home.
my initials carved
on the trunk of a tree -
roots of ancients
II
The sea grapes are green. They do well to hide among the leaves. Looking out at the beautiful crystal sea, a jet of sea spray follows the water skier. Puffy white clouds fashion the sky - Grand Anse beach St Georges.
flip flops prove
tedious senseless foot wear -
wet sand hot sand
III
There at Portobello Road, there where the hagglers meet to bargain, just for the tradition of buying and selling in this particular way, I share my smile to a click of the camera . London is foggy I expected a Caribbean kind of sunshine, after all, they told me it was summer
bubble gum ice cream -
a distant tinkling now
growing soft softer
A SNIPPET OF THREE CITIES © gillena cox 2016
Glossary
Benne balls - a sweet made from sesame seeds
[image from yahoo dot com]
In response to Grapeling's prompt Travel: Get Listed for August
These are all wonderful! Adore the prose - such great moments and thoughts captured.
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I love how you used this challenge... like a little postcard coming home... and that view of summer in London I do understand... Stockholm is mostly similar... you should have seen people drinking beer on the quays of Tromso though... an Arctic summer can be splendid too...
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This is wonderful! I love the changing imagery in the verses as you travel from one place to another. Blessings!
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I love these --- especially the hint of a scar in "Scarborough," "women selling the benne balls," the flip-flops (even if discarded), "Portobello Road," "I share my smile to a click of the camera," "bubble gum ice cream," and "growing soft softer."
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Very sweet poem, Gillena. Thanks. k .
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