Monday, May 23, 2016

Monday WRites 59



HIBISCUS
[version Sunday 29th May 2016]
She decorates hedges with delight
Pesky little girls, stick their tongues out
She however never ever, gets in a fight
Under skies, where bloom cumulus clouds
And a house where dogs bark, hedges with delight
Looping butterflies in passing may rest
Swaying in furls, what a pleasurable sight
Then off they go, on their journeying
All is profusion, in her blooming might
Wings dancing to the beat of a breeze
Left behind now, familiar, hedges with delight

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HIBISCUS
[version Monday WRites 59]
She decorates hedges with delight
Pesky little girls, stick their tongues out
But they never ever, get in a fight
Under skies, where bloom cumulus clouds
A house where dogs bark, hedges with delight
Looping butterflies in passing may rest
Swaying in furls, what a pleasurable sight
Then off they go, on their journeying
All is profusion, in her blooming might
Wings dancing to the beat of a breeze
Left behind, familiar, hedges with delight
HIBISCUS © gillena cox 2016



You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #59, ❧✿❧ Whats your mood like today ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites




GRAB MY BUTTON

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Monday WRites 59; edited to link up to Bjorns prompt
The Butterfly Effect
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

12 comments:

  1. Looping butterflies in passing may rest
    Swaying in furls, what a pleasurable sight

    Beautiful both in words and image :D
    Have a wonderful week ahead Gillena.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa


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  2. Happy you linked in Rosemary

    much love...

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  3. A wonderful delight to have those hedges and the butterflies...

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  4. This is a happy poem. Butterflies and hedges - what else does one need?

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    1. Indeed! Thanks for dropping in Sara

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  5. Both versions are just lovely....I feel myself resting and watching nature pass through....the beauty and peace washing over me!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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    1. I couldn't find the link button?

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    2. Something went wrong i will edit and fix it. Thanks Donna

      much love...

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    3. Happy you dropped in Donna

      much love...

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