Peacock photo from my visit to The Wild Fowl Trust, Point a Pierre, Trinidad in March 2012
CRUNCH COLOUR AND LACE
In a crunch of dried leaves he stood there looking at us
A group of curious passersby wearing the click
On our cell phones
I wonder if his plumes are wide open today displaying
The arrogance of a male Narcissus carrying
His colours in radiance
Maybe he will give his white queen some of his plumage
To paints her sons dazzling jewels in the sunny roost, maybe
White lace if daughters
© gillena cox 2015
Written for Kerry's Play It Again Toads #23
i choose Brudberg's Time Travel
Beautifully done, in both versions.
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That's really pretty!
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A beautiful pic and lovely conceit. Thanks. k.
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I hope it would.. A beautiful mix
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Such a dazzling display. I like the subtle references to time in each stanza.
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Oh yes! They are like white lace!
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I love the use of Narcissus. Great write, Gillena!
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