Monday, October 19, 2015

Monday WRites 34


Jeane Myers - Far South of Dawn
From google dot com

MORNING INCOMING
It matters not this silence, sworn of coming morning
For when the frequencies of frenzy, reach the line
It is finished, night is over and day is drummed in
With a toot, a twitter, a street broom swished in time
Its chatter sharp and clear, sworn of coming morning
All the remaining minutes stuffed in a pouch all mine
To contemplate, to hoard like the stuff of Pandora
Sealed and labelled 'do not open, contents a shrine'
Of meditating in-breaths deepened and slowed down
Stretched and limbered for sleuth of word and cline
Purported or penned to the sworn of coming morning
MORNING INCOMING © gillena cox 2015

MORNING INCOMING - a FOLD
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You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites ( musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #34, ❧✿❧ whats your mood today ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites



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12 comments:

  1. Such a powerful declaration of morning.. which comes as a new beginning after the past events of the previous night. Beautifully executed!

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. Oh I like the way your voice comes across here.. the alliteration works so very well.

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  3. Like the idea of time being a Pandora's box.

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    1. thanks for your appreciation Thotpurge

      much love...

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  4. "It is finished, night is over and day is drummed in
    With a toot, a twitter, a street broom swished in time
    Its chatter sharp and clear" love this and your title is wonderful!

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  5. I like the contrast of sound you have created, Gillena. It is a very vibrant poem.

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  6. I love this evocation of morning, and the busy sounds of your particular place.

    Sorry I have not managed any Monday Writes lately – life is busy and it is usually my Wednesday by the time I would be able to do it.

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    1. Happy you took the time to drop in Rosemary

      much love...

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