[image from google]
Stars in the planetarium,
As they whirled overhead,
Awesome.
Viewed in yester millenium,
What a dynamic spread,
For some.
Fishes in the aquarium,
How lovely they all said.
Buy some,
And also an anthurium
For the vase by the bed,
Saw some
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Prompted to: Write a poem following the poetry form, Memento.
Memento
Memento, created by Emily Romano is a poem about a holiday or an anniversary, consisting of two stanzas as follows: the syllable count should be 8 beats for line one; 6 beats for line two; and two beats for line three. This is repeated twice for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is: a/b/c/a/b/c for each of the two stanzas.
Brilliant! You made it look so easy! The rhymes are clever (and amusing) and I can feel the beat. I found it hard getting beat and rhyme to play nicely together.
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Beautiful juxtaposition position of images. Amazing use of the form, GC ❤️
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How lovely, Gillena!
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From stars to fishes, nice one. :)
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A great poem, Gillena. Such a beautiful flower!
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Well done, Gillena. Such a great flow to this--stars, fish, and flowers! 💙
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Gillena - you are such a talented writer, in any form! Thanks for visiting my blog!
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I have those anthurium plants in the house. Wish I have some fish in an aquarium. Thanks for joining in.
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I love the way you showed such a nice world.
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