Friday, December 2, 2022

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JUMBLE-E JUMBLE-I

That Christmas will be unaffected;

Celebrate your past tokens.

Goodnight my love until we meet;

Out of those crows.


Smell of petrichor;

No! No one wants this.

They are pigeons. 

He knew he was fool all the same.


Be, the perfect hue of that moon global.

One more thing, the chrysanthemum, a nice finish.

Wild to wanton it grew;

Midmorning sunshine.

JUMBLE-E JUMBLE-I © gillena cox 2022


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BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH 
Challenge:
– choose at least 12 poems (for this 12th month!)
– keep each line intact, unadulterated
– you may  add  preposition,  conjunction or change of tense  if it helps the flow
– you may use enjambment to break a line
– the lines do not have to follow date order
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19 comments:

  1. Ken / rivrvlogrDecember 2, 2022 at 12:37 AM

    ❤️

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  2. Laura BloomsburyDecember 2, 2022 at 6:26 AM

    the title is perfect! reads like a Christmas puzzle
    "One more thing, the chrysanthemum a nice finish.

    Wild to wanton it grew"

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  3. MargaretDecember 2, 2022 at 10:19 AM

    an enjoyable jumble!

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    1. Gillena CoxDecember 3, 2022 at 5:26 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Margaret

      Much💜love

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  4. paeansunpluggedDecember 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM

    A wonderful jumble, Gillena! 💙

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    1. Gillena CoxDecember 3, 2022 at 5:26 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Punam

      Much💜love

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  5. KerfeDecember 2, 2022 at 3:10 PM

    This reads like a dream.

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  6. Gillena CoxDecember 3, 2022 at 6:42 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Kerfe

    Much💜love

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  7. GraceDecember 3, 2022 at 12:09 PM

    Love the last stanza - it brings color of sunshine.

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  8. Sanaa RizviDecember 3, 2022 at 2:40 PM

    This is wonderfully composed, Gillena!! 💘💘

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  9. Merril D. SmithDecember 3, 2022 at 4:14 PM

    Nicely done, Gillena! 💙

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  10. HelenDecember 3, 2022 at 5:03 PM

    To reinforce your poetry is memorable I remember more than several of those last lines!!!

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  11. Gillena CoxDecember 4, 2022 at 11:12 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Helen.

    Much💜love

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  12. dwru27December 4, 2022 at 9:26 PM

    Very nice Gillena. I love your last two lines.

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  13. Gillena CoxDecember 5, 2022 at 7:34 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

    Much💜love

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  14. brudbergDecember 5, 2022 at 4:23 PM

    This is so lovely to read... and the ending in sun make it sound cozy

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  15. Gillena CoxDecember 7, 2022 at 12:25 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much💜love

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