Monday, June 5, 2017

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GHOST TOWN
Under eyebrow of day
Shone resplendent sun
Pistols emptied in shells of ray
Vacant the concrete of everyone
Except for snippets of murmuring breeze
Scant this ghost town a forever siesta

Whiffs and wafts clouds looked from above
As phantom counting drought-scars below
Shhh! in ambles quick-draw overcast
And a riddle of bullets of rain
GHOST TOWN © gillena cox 2017

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5 June 2015



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Location: St James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

9 comments:

  1. SreejaJune 5, 2017 at 11:47 PM

    Except for snippets of murmuring breeze
    Scant this ghost town a forever siesta......... hauntingly deserted ...!

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    1. Gillena CoxJune 6, 2017 at 7:50 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Sreeja

      Much love...

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  2. Sanaa RizviJune 6, 2017 at 1:25 AM

    I like 'Under eyebrow of day' and 'riddled bullets of rain' sigh.. Beautifully executed.

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  3. grapelingJune 6, 2017 at 2:33 PM

    what a great opening and closing, Gillena ~

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    1. Gillena CoxJune 7, 2017 at 3:32 AM

      Thanks for dropping by Michael

      Much love...

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJune 7, 2017 at 12:14 AM

    Wild West – but gentled with time (and desertion).

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    1. Gillena CoxJune 7, 2017 at 3:32 AM

      😊thanks for your appreciation Rosemary

      Much love...

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  5. MargaretJune 23, 2017 at 12:18 AM

    under eyebrow of day.... Yes, I enjoy ghost walks - at night they are fun and can be eery, but daytime those same places look normal. :)

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