Monday, April 6, 2015

Monday WRites - 6

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You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #6; whats your mood today ❧✿❧ my poem today is a cinquain; 2.4.6.8.2 syllable form ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites
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the stars
are far away yes
my grand child told me so
she is just two going on three
sweetheart
© gillena cox

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I Wrote in response to the prompt today at
Poems In April Seeing Stars - Sixth Day of National Poetry Month
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

oh and i luvvvvv this, hope you enjoy ❧✿❧ HAPPY EASTER MONDAY


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36 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorApril 6, 2015 at 7:54 AM

    I love to see the world through the eyes of a child.

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    1. Gillena CoxApril 6, 2015 at 9:46 AM

      surely a wealth of innocence which draws us back to a reality that oh so necessary at times; thanks for dropping by Sherry

      much love...

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  2. Donna SmithApril 6, 2015 at 9:54 AM

    So, so cute! I love the simple, clarity of observation.

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  3. OutlawyerApril 6, 2015 at 10:16 AM

    Very pretty poem, lovely close. k. (Manicddaily)

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  4. Maude LynnApril 6, 2015 at 10:24 AM

    That's really lovely!

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  5. Sumana RoyApril 6, 2015 at 10:33 AM

    aww...so sweet...

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  6. Buddah MoskowitzApril 6, 2015 at 11:04 AM

    Great snapshot of such innocence.

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  7. HannahApril 6, 2015 at 12:12 PM

    This is so heart-warming!

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  8. Debi SwimApril 6, 2015 at 1:44 PM

    Their observations are so wonderful. Grandkids are special people.

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  9. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 6, 2015 at 1:51 PM

    What a delectable cinquain - like its inspiration, I'm sure.

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  10. Blog It Or Lose ItApril 6, 2015 at 2:34 PM

    Very sweet, Gillena :)
    Loved the song too; had heard the Don McLean version but not this one. :)

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyApril 6, 2015 at 2:38 PM

    This is so sweetly perfect.

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  12. Annie JeffriesApril 6, 2015 at 2:40 PM

    They say the most obvious things and then I think, Oh! Yeah! Of course. Why didn't I think of that?

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  13. Sanaa RizviApril 6, 2015 at 7:01 PM

    This is absolutely exquisite!!
    xoxo

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  14. cosmos camiApril 6, 2015 at 8:06 PM

    Sweet!
    All things are learned anew when children are around.

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    1. Gillena CoxApril 7, 2015 at 7:17 AM

      Surely surely, Thanks for dropping in Cami

      much love...

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  15. EllaApril 6, 2015 at 10:17 PM

    This makes me smile! What a sweetheart~

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  16. MaschaApril 6, 2015 at 11:28 PM

    Sweet poem and song.
    Have a blessed week

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  17. Susie ClevengerApril 6, 2015 at 11:38 PM

    The beauty of the world as seen by a child is priceless.

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    1. Gillena CoxApril 7, 2015 at 7:16 AM

      indeed Susie, thanks for dropping in

      much love...

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  18. grapelingApril 7, 2015 at 5:31 PM

    very sweet ~

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