Without Fantasies,
These i have loved:
The quiet dark anticipating dawn,
Unfolding in layers of whistles and songs of sky birds,
Dare of the tropical mockingbird that skips across my wall,
The shadows of banana leaves in upcoming light,
Without the fantasies,
They are just banana fronds dancing with the wind,
Radiant raindrops couching in cool flowers;
And flowers themselves, that sway through sunny hours,
Dreaming of moths that drink them under the moon
The stark white of plumerias against this background of clearing new day,
The coolness envelops my backyard,
Where a chair lay tumbled,
Maybe from a sprinting cat or maybe a strong gust,
Ah! day breaks:
The cloud palette is yellow, misty yellow.
All these have been my loves.
© gillena cox 2026
Note: The bold lines are from the second stanza of ‘The Great Lover’ by Rupert Brooke


This is lovely, Gillena, and I love that you included some lines from the Brookes poem. I especially love the opening lines, and that you’ve included your beloved plumerias.
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Lover-ly poem, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful poem, Gillena!! I love how this poem captures the quiet awakening of the world at dawn. The images of birds, flowers, rain, and the humble fallen chair create a sense of wonder in the everyday, reminding us how much beauty surrounds us when we take the time to notice.
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🙂 thanks for your appreciation, Lynn
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A great list of wonderful joys in your life!
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Such a lovely poem!
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Such a lovely list of little joys worthy of love in this life.
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Love all those things from your tropical paradise
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Love the notes of longing in this piece…
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation, Paula
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