Thursday, June 11, 2026

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 Mountain range view from St James,🇹🇹 

Who dares crop the mountain,

Not me maybe you not i,

Bulky bulge enormous insane,

Clouds can sit in passing by,

Giants jealous of passing rain,

Shelter with umbrellas and sigh,

If you raise your mind to gain, 

Out of respect to the higher guy, 

Buzzards pass watch  you strange,

Crazies! on the mountain range.

Hoping they will bring about change

© gillena cox 2026



Blog Hopping Today With

Legs Eleven 

  Writing in the form:
2. The Eleventh Power by Christina Jussaume,
11 line poem
1 stanza
11 syllables per line
rhyme scheme of abababccddd or ababababccc,
an uplifting theme




15 comments:

  1. This has a fun flow to it! And perhaps a serious message?

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  2. Lots of crazies on the mountains here in Thailand!

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  3. I enjoyed the flow and imagery of this poem, Gillena! Bravo!💗

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  4. You can’t argue with a mountain, Gillena! I love the description ‘bulky bulge enormous insane’.

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  5. You bring us a little glimpse of your world, Gillena, I love
    "Clouds can sit in passing by,
    Giants jealous of passing rain,"

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation, Frewin

      Much love

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  6. Makes me wonder what the rest of the story is, Gillena.

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation, Christopher

    Much love

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