Mountain range view from St James,🇹🇹
Who dares crop the mountain,Not me maybe you not i,
Bulky bulge enormous insane,
Clouds can sit in passing by,
Giants jealous of passing rain,
Shelter with umbrellas and sigh,
If you raise your mind to gain,
Out of respect to the higher guy,
Buzzards pass watch you strange,
Crazies! on the mountain range.
Hoping they will bring about change
© gillena cox 2026
Blog Hopping Today With
Legs Eleven
Legs Eleven
Writing in the form:
2. The Eleventh Power by Christina Jussaume,
11 line poem
1 stanza
11 syllables per line
rhyme scheme of abababccddd or ababababccc,
an uplifting theme


This has a fun flow to it! And perhaps a serious message?
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Lots of crazies on the mountains here in Thailand!
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I enjoyed the flow and imagery of this poem, Gillena! Bravo!💗
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You can’t argue with a mountain, Gillena! I love the description ‘bulky bulge enormous insane’.
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You bring us a little glimpse of your world, Gillena, I love
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Makes me wonder what the rest of the story is, Gillena.
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Lovely imagery as always. Christopher
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Lovely imagery, and wonderful photo!
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