Thursday, March 12, 2026

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[image courtedy dVerse Poets Pub]
Chip chip Reward
These wet rocks,
where the tide has been, 
Barnacled white and weeded, 
Brown sandals gingerly,
Wend their way across as if,
Asking questions of ocean stir,
Still clinging to soles and stone,
Some days a catch of shells,
Settle in between crevasses,
Waiting willingly to flavor a pot,
So they come searching with,
Buckets and pails for the reward.
©  gillena cox 2026

NoteChip chip" refers primarily to small Donax coquina clams found on the east coast beaches of Trinidad, particularly in Mayaro. They are a popular local seafood delicacy, often boiled, cleaned to remove sand, and prepared in curries or as "chip chip accra"[from google]


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Challenge: to take inspiration from the opening line from Edna St Vincent Millay’s poem “Low tide.” 

These wet rocks where the tide has been, barnacled white and weeded brown. In writing a new poem.

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14 comments:

  1. Beautiful Gillena. So much fun gathering those shells.

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  2. Thanks for your appreciation, Dwight

    Much love

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  3. The rocks can capture the bounty of the sea! I hadn't heard of "chip chip" before. 🦪

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation, Christopher

    Much love

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  5. This is absolutely stunning, Gillena! Wow! I love how the opening line served as a springboard for the poem ❤️❤️

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  6. Thanks for your appreciation, Kim

    Much love

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  7. Gillena,
    I like these lines,
    Wend their way across as if,
    Asking questions of ocean stir,

    I also appreciate how the end of your poem loops back to the beginning.
    Great to meet you on the live dVerse gathering.

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  8. Thank you for your appreciation, Ali

    Much love

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