Tuesday, May 7, 2024

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[Bing AI created this image for me]

This Chair

This chair stood among the clouds,

Surreal and empty, tired from wandering;

You would think it didn't belong,

But it certainly did;

For what are spaces for,

If not to delete a void.


Every footstep in life to pilgrimage


The emptiness, the aloofness;

A chair without a table, resting now,

A chair without a sitter;

One wonders how not why,

How did it get here among clouds

Cumulus in thought,

Puffy with intent,

Alone  and surreal.


Every footstep in life to pilgrimage


Perhaps the sitter fell off,

Like Jack fleeing a giant,

Grasping a beanstalk,

Or maybe there was no sitter;

Only a chair among clouds,

Just the way the dreamer crafted.


Every footstep in life to pilgrimage


This Chair © gillena cox 2024

 
BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
The challenge i rsponded to: 
4. Find or create an image and write an ekphrastic
 poem about pilgrimage, wandering, or walkabout to it. 

REVISIT TO READ

24 comments:

  1. I love the image and the playfulness of the poem.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Nolcha

    Much♡ love

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  3. This is a lovely read to read out loud to young ears...well done Gillena..

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Callsing

      Much♡ love

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  4. Thanks for dropping by Ken

    Much♡love

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  5. Lovely poem in response to the image.

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Arcadia

    Much♡ love

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  7. Wonderful poem, Gillena. I love your creativity on this.

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  8. Thank you for your appreciation Dwight

    Much♡ love

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  9. I like the repetition in this poem, Gillena, and surrealism of the wandering chair, and especially:
    ‘The emptiness, the aloofness;
    A chair without a table, resting now,
    A chair without a sitter’.

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  10. Thank you for your appreciation Kim

    Much♡ love

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  11. I guess everything matters in the end and every step furthers our pilgrimage. A nice, somewhat abstract, creative poem. - OP

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Nitin

      Much♡love

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  12. Wow! I enjoyed your creative take, Gillena. :)

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Kitty

      Much♡love

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  13. Excellent ekphrastic, Gillena! Cohesive and insightful. My favorite line:
    "For what are spaces for,
    If not to delete a void."

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Lisa

      Much♡love

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  14. Just beautiful!! The poetry and the artwork is truly wonderful!!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Kym

      Much♡love

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  15. What a lovely ekphrastic poem, Gillena! 💙

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  16. Thank you for your appreciation Punam

    Much♡love

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  17. Gillena, The refrain works beautifully, resonating in the mind with its wisdom.

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  18. Thank you for your appreciation Dora

    Much♡love

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