I wish upon a star,
My angels travel far.
I hear the moon is beautiful;
And sometimes wish i could,
See a closer view,
As only a zoom lens knew,
The beauty of sky land.
I wish upon a star,
My angels travel far.
© gillena cox 2023
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This is Monday WRites 389
You've heard about the Monday Blues
well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea).
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I love your poem. Ties in well with Bjorn's pebble poem. Great use of the prompt.
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Oh, to have an angel's view of the stars! Lovely form, with rhyme.
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Such a lovely poem with beautiful imagery of the stars.
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I especially love the phrase "I hear the moon is beautiful." So wonderful. My brain wants to add "this time of year..." ;)
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Beautiful poetry, GC.
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Pretty images in your poem. :)
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Your quadrille is like a hug, Gillena! I love the line ‘I hear the moon is beautiful’ and the thought that angels travel far.
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I love the way you used the distant view to see the greatness.
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