Monday, August 15, 2022

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[image courtesy dVerse poery pub]  
Through the deep caves of thought I hear a voice that sings:—–by Oliver Wentdell Holmes Sr., from The Chambered Nautilus

LAZY DAYS AND MONDAYS
A song sings to the heart, from a deep place of lazy being. It gathers strength in its silence, reaching on unseen wings to a clever site of understanding.

 Through the deep caves of thought I hear a voice that sings, a song so clear and smart, that a mundane Monday understands the hearts yearning for more than its lazy care.

I get up in the rhythm of serious understanding and reverent obedience. I go to the washing machine. It is time to do the laundry. Two tubs are whirled and swooshed, and hung out to air dry.  Well done to me, lazy retirement days are sooo very embracing.
 © gillena cox 2022


BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
dVerse — Prosery Monday — A Voice that Sings
Prompted to: Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose up of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line from the poem.

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27 comments:

  1. Gillena, I like how you describe the movement and stillness of music. I can see you there with the tunes playing and doing your laundry. Am I right in thinking you recently retired? Good for you in so many ways :)

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  2. Oh no, i am retired a long time now, since 2003.
    Thanks for dropping by Lili.

    much💖love

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  3. Loved the richness and energy in this piece Gillena. You wove the line in beautifully my friend. Much love to you… 🙂✌🏼❤️

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  4. Oh so lovely Gillena! Even the washing was musical ☺️

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  5. Wow! Beautifully written in its telling of a mundane Monday.

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  6. A song in the heart makes every day a great day! Well done, Gillena.

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

    Much💖love

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  8. I love what you did with the prompt line, Gillena! I’m with you on lazy retirement days – all the more time to read and write!

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  9. I loved your use of the prompt. A song that beckons you to do something and not laze around might be a good one. Although too much of it can be a little tiresome! Great piece.

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  10. Loved it, Gillena. You find the magical in an everyday Monday.

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  11. Thanks for your appreciation Tanmay

    Much💖love

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  12. Lovely, Gillena. A song in the heart! 💙

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  13. Thanks for dropping by Merril

    Much💖love

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  14. Those voices do gather strength in silence. The heart is full of them.

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  15. heehee! I love how down-to-earth the ending of this piece is, GIllena - it made me smile!

    Much love,
    David

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  16. Your story is quite musical in its movements and so evocative of emotions that stir from daily moments, I so love the opening sentence and the strength music brings. I also love how you positively celebrate being retired.

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  18. Your true story is a delight. Washing clothes and Mondays went hand in hand throughout my childhood. Cheers.

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  19. Happy you dropped by Helen

    Much💖love

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