Sunday, February 19, 2017

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[2016 Children's Carnival in St James]

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children's carnival Sunday

the thin wafer of morning moon
has vanished like a Cheshire cat

in the afternoon
the main street thronged
with dancing children
© gillena cox 2017

Blog hopping today with
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
And the Moon ~ Micro Poetry



Revisit
19 Feb 2016

10 comments:

  1. Oh I love this!❤️ Especially those children dancing down the street.. sigh.. so adorable!!❤️

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  2. Thanks for dropping by Sanaa

    Much love...

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  3. Such a colourful celebration. I would love to visit Trinidad and Tobago one day. Your poetry has brought it alive for me.

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    1. happy my poetry has claimed you interest for T&T Kerry; wish you would visit some time and have an enjoyable stay

      much love...

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  4. This is wonderful; the first line is particularly striking.

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    1. Happy you dropped in Lemon

      much love...

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    1. Thanks for dropping in Rosemary

      much love...

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  6. I can almost hear the laughter, music, and dance...

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    1. Happy you dropped in Magaly

      much love...

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