PARAMOUR
Gentle breezes, touching cheeks; fingers of sun rays, putting to shame every master painter, stroking in warm colour, on faces, lifted, like praise worthy palms; a sensuous wind drafts by, lifting skirts in magical sweeps, of windy-gesturing-Eros.
sunlit daybed strewn -
lo! bougainvillea shrouded
in veined scarlet bracts,
PARAMOUR © gillena cox 2016
Sunday Mini-Challenge: The Paramour
Brendan says "The first written poetry of our Western tradition began in Greece between the seventh and sixth centuries BC. Standing at the border of the preliterate, poets like Archilochos and Anakreon found an alphabet in which to ferry verbal expression into the symbolic language of the mind. The act transformed culture and history and who we are. (The literate is now disappearing behind visual culture, borne by wordless ferry-workers.)
Where were the first literate poets going when they wrote their song down? It wasn’t to philosophy or myth; instead, they dazzled to the arrow-thwocks of erotic love. Sappho, another of the first poets of the literate age, wrote:
Eros, once again limb-loosener whirls me
sweetbitter, impossible to fight off, stealing up...
For this challenge, lets go back to the edge of that forest and name the paramours who led us to write. Let’s celebrate the badness of that defining encounter which has inspired our best work. Celebrate them individually or serially, angelically or down and dirty—swamp-prime"
"putting
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every
master
painter,
stroking
in warm
colour"
Love love love.
But this, baby, is brilliant:
"bougainvillea shrouded
in veined scarlet bracts"
Thanks for dropping in 'radiohead'
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Oh I so love that you have put the contrast between the prose on the bougainvillea in the center... wonderful writing.
ReplyDeleteThe close is especially cool--great words, thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in to read mine K
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Some really nice imagery going on in this piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rommy
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I like your word choices, like "magical sweeps" and "shrouded
ReplyDeletein veined scarlet bracts"--they added a sense of gentle softness throughout.
Thanks for your appreciation CC
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Some blooms seem to evoke a sense of passion.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in to read mine Kerry
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Eros spirited Psyche up to his magic castle in the sky, so the uplifting breeze here is perfect. It's sunny and sensual and bad. I'm hearing "Me and Mrs. Jones." Thanks for the slow-dance.
ReplyDeleteThanks for a very interesting prompt Brendan. I'm happy you dropped by to read mine
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Loved this line "fingers of sun rays, putting to shame every master painter." So true! Just beautiful Gillena a work of art. Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in to read mine Bekkie
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Natures blooms the most glorious poetry, and your hears her song! ♥
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you dropped by to read mine Magaly
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what a lovely write.
ReplyDeletebeautiful and sensual, yet somehow reminding me of spring. :)
Thanks for your appreciation Stacy Lynn
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I love every element of this – gorgeous Marilyn, the ultimate fantasy; the delicious haibun and particularly that exquisite haiku; and the fab music by an artist unknown to me before. Thank you for all of it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rosemary
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Excellent poem!
ReplyDeleteLove this:
"putting
to shame
every
master
painter,
stroking
in warm
colour"
Thanks Hannah
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Love it...especially the ending. There is a sensuous joy to it.
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