Tuesday, May 5, 2015

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ITS LIKE
like sunlight to start each morning
like birdsongs to awaken each bud
like wafting clouds with pastels hues
like the fragrance absorbing dew

................................of course the moon shines for the dark night
................................of course the stars design the after hours
................................of course the clink of ice soothes the ambers
................................of course bouquets tumble at the feet of goddesses

Liken life's canvas of hot laval splurges
Coursing through tenebrist tales ever aright
© gillena cox







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20 comments:

  1. Thank you for dropping in Annell

    much love...

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  2. I love the pastoral you paint..

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  3. Whoa.. this is so vibrant :D
    Loved it..!
    xoxo

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  4. So beautifully, brilliantly, uniquely expressed!

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  5. Beautiful nature and life........................

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    1. thanks for dropping in to read mine, Vandana

      much love...

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  6. I 'like' this one, Gillena. 'Like' it made me thing of the Haley's Comet Meteor Rock shower that I missed last night because of the clouds. Of course I could have paid to see it on-line.
    ..

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    1. Happy you dropped in Jim
      i read an article which says "The shower, however will last through May 20th."

      you may still be able to see some of it

      much love...

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  7. I like the listing effect of the similes and visual elements.

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    1. thank you for your appreciation Kerry

      much love...

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    2. My favourite line was the bouquet tumbling at the goddess's feet. A joyful poem...emitting lots of sunshine for us all to enjoy !

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    3. happy you dropped in Rall

      much love...

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