Tuesday, May 5, 2015

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ITS LIKE
like sunlight to start each morning
like birdsongs to awaken each bud
like wafting clouds with pastels hues
like the fragrance absorbing dew

................................of course the moon shines for the dark night
................................of course the stars design the after hours
................................of course the clink of ice soothes the ambers
................................of course bouquets tumble at the feet of goddesses

Liken life's canvas of hot laval splurges
Coursing through tenebrist tales ever aright
© gillena cox







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Location: Saint James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

20 comments:

  1. annell4May 5, 2015 at 1:49 PM

    Oh, I like it! Thanks.

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  2. Gillena CoxMay 5, 2015 at 2:02 PM

    Thank you for dropping in Annell

    much love...

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  3. brudbergMay 5, 2015 at 2:17 PM

    I love the pastoral you paint..

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  4. Sanaa RizviMay 5, 2015 at 2:54 PM

    Whoa.. this is so vibrant :D
    Loved it..!
    xoxo

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  5. Maude LynnMay 5, 2015 at 5:54 PM

    Beautiful!

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMay 5, 2015 at 5:58 PM

    So beautifully, brilliantly, uniquely expressed!

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  7. Vandana SharmaMay 6, 2015 at 2:26 AM

    Beautiful nature and life........................

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2015 at 10:40 AM

      thanks for dropping in to read mine, Vandana

      much love...

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  8. JimMay 6, 2015 at 8:16 AM

    I 'like' this one, Gillena. 'Like' it made me thing of the Haley's Comet Meteor Rock shower that I missed last night because of the clouds. Of course I could have paid to see it on-line.
    ..

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 6, 2015 at 10:44 AM

      Happy you dropped in Jim
      i read an article which says "The shower, however will last through May 20th."

      you may still be able to see some of it

      much love...

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    2. JimMay 6, 2015 at 11:05 AM

      :) <3

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    3. Gillena CoxMay 7, 2015 at 8:24 AM

      (◕‿◕｡)

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  9. Kerry O'ConnorMay 6, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    I like the listing effect of the similes and visual elements.

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    1. Gillena CoxMay 7, 2015 at 8:05 AM

      thank you for your appreciation Kerry

      much love...

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    2. rallentandaMay 8, 2015 at 10:25 PM

      My favourite line was the bouquet tumbling at the goddess's feet. A joyful poem...emitting lots of sunshine for us all to enjoy !

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    3. Gillena CoxMay 9, 2015 at 9:07 PM

      happy you dropped in Rall

      much love...

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