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TOMORROWS
In breath, slowly.... slowly....
Awaken the pink clouds of morning dew
The eyelids of those sleepers
Those buds of adventures
Sheltered in sleep of ancient patternings
The fabric of colour fragrance and shape
Hungry for the light of solar rays
Supernova shinning day star - Sun
Pour your warm breath of life giving
Hope to the fires of tomorrows
Consume the void of night
© gillena cox

[64 words title included]

Written in response to
Words Count With Mama Zen...challenge - What are you hungry for? Tell me in 60 words or less . . . but take an extra ten if you can make me blush.

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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 23, 2015 at 2:32 PM

    Consume the void of night...that's lovely.

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  2. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 3:24 PM

    Thanks George

    much love...

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  3. brudbergJanuary 23, 2015 at 3:27 PM

    I can so much feel this in my bones.. there is way too much night here in Sweden still ..

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  4. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 3:40 PM

    (◕‿◕｡) Happy you dropped in Bjorn

    much love...

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  5. HannahJanuary 23, 2015 at 4:29 PM

    "in sleep of ancient patternings" I particularly enjoy this...excellent poem.

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  6. Maude LynnJanuary 23, 2015 at 5:16 PM

    I really like "consume the void of night."

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  7. UnknownJanuary 23, 2015 at 5:43 PM

    I really liked that you've made a contrast between light and dark in this, and that the poem itself is really warming.

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  8. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 6:08 PM

    Thanks Hannah

    Much love...

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  9. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 6:08 PM

    Thanks mama zen

    Much love...

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  10. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 6:09 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Ken

    Much love...

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  11. Other MaryJanuary 23, 2015 at 8:40 PM

    Beautiful, and I like that you never said the word hunger or hungry.

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  12. Gillena CoxJanuary 23, 2015 at 10:12 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Mary

    Much love ...

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  13. Amrita SabatJanuary 24, 2015 at 1:12 AM

    I like the words 'giving hope to the fires of tomorrow'. very optimistic thoughts! :)

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  14. Gillena CoxJanuary 24, 2015 at 10:15 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Amrita

    Much love ...

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  15. MarianJanuary 24, 2015 at 11:50 AM

    feeling this today :)

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  16. Gillena CoxJanuary 25, 2015 at 7:12 AM

    Happy you dropped by Marian

    much love...



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  17. Sunil UniyalJanuary 25, 2015 at 1:28 PM

    Lovely spiritual poem....enjoyed reading.

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  18. Gillena CoxJanuary 25, 2015 at 2:54 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sunil

    much love...

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  19. Susie ClevengerJanuary 26, 2015 at 3:20 AM

    Such a beautiful blooming

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  20. Gillena CoxJanuary 28, 2015 at 9:10 AM

    Happy you dropped in Susie

    much love...

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