Monday, September 8, 2025

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[image courtesy dVerse Poets Pub]

 It was much more than sitting,

Much more than applauding,

So much more than an evening

Out to see them dancing.


So much more than bodies twisting,

More than engaging

In those fine stories unfolding, 

To the attention of a spellbound audience,

Much more.

© gillena cox 2025

24 comments:

  1. Love the repetition here. Sounds like a wonderful evening!

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  2. Amazing muchness here... it must have been amazing

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  3. I love it Gillena. Pleasure is much more than just sight and sound!

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

    Much♡love

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  5. Effective use of repetition, Gillena, and the use of the continuous tense makes it all very immediate.

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  6. Oh, it sounds wonderful. You can never have too many stories or storytellers! 💙

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  7. I really like how you chased down the word much and I had a lot of fun with it. It’s really nice.

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  8. I am imagining you in the audience, watching one of your loved ones performing.

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  9. Thanks for your appreciation Jae

    Much♡love

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Rosemary

      Much♡love

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  11. Sounds like an evening I would have loved!!! Cheers to you, Gillena.

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  12. You used the prompt word so masterfully.

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  13. I picture people swinging each other out on the dance floor at a grand party!

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  14. Thanks for dropping by Christine

    Much♡love

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