Thursday, February 13, 2025

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Love I Crave: A Fold
You are as smooth as satin, 
As clear as sea at Grand Anse Beach,
There are no hidden agendas in
Your purpose, or your claims,
To a touch as smooth as satin;
Caressing a welcoming cheek,
Sweet Julie mango juice, running
Down, from the eater's  mouth,
Satisfying a soul's longing:
Patient and kind, and near scriptural,
The love i crave, as smooth as satin.
© gillena cox 2025

22 comments:

  1. A lovely fold, Gillena, especially the repetition of the phrase ‘smooth as satin’.

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  2. Love how you folded this... almost like bedsheets.

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  3. 🙂 thanks for your appreciation Björn

    Much♡love

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  4. Gillena, I love what you chose and the sensuousness of your poem.

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  5. All leading up to that lovely last line...

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  6. I love the vivid imagery, Gillena!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  7. Such a lovely, romantic Fold poem this is, Gillena! ❤️❤️

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  8. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much♡love

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  9. I enjoyed your poem, Gillena. I think I found why I could not post a response on your site. I had my tracking blocker on Strict. I set it to Medium and now I can post! :>)

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    1. I djd miss your comments lately. Glad you are back on track, Dwight

      Much♡love

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  10. Smooth and juicy, Gillena! I love it.

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  11. A beautiful ode to love, Gillena. Just what it should be! 💙

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  12. Thanks for dropping by Merril

    Much♡love

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  13. Thanks for dropping by Punam

    Much♡love

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  14. Thanks for dropping by Nolcha

    Much♡love

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