Love I Crave: A Fold
You are as smooth as satin,
As clear as sea at Grand Anse Beach,
There are no hidden agendas in
Your purpose, or your claims,
To a touch as smooth as satin;
Caressing a welcoming cheek,
Sweet Julie mango juice, running
Down, from the eater's mouth,
Satisfying a soul's longing:
Patient and kind, and near scriptural,
The love i crave, as smooth as satin.
© gillena cox 2025
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A lovely fold, Gillena, especially the repetition of the phrase ‘smooth as satin’.
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Love how you folded this... almost like bedsheets.
ReplyDelete🙂 thanks for your appreciation Björn
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Gillena, I love what you chose and the sensuousness of your poem.
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All leading up to that lovely last line...
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I love the vivid imagery, Gillena!
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Such a lovely, romantic Fold poem this is, Gillena! ❤️❤️
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I enjoyed your poem, Gillena. I think I found why I could not post a response on your site. I had my tracking blocker on Strict. I set it to Medium and now I can post! :>)
ReplyDeleteI djd miss your comments lately. Glad you are back on track, Dwight
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Smooth and juicy, Gillena! I love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for youf appreciatikn Dora
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A beautiful ode to love, Gillena. Just what it should be! 💙
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Love it, Gillena!❤️
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Beautiful writing, Gillena!
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