Tuesday, May 21, 2024

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Music To My Ears - A Cento
In this magical village, 
I walk briskly in October’s chill, but the tune I hear is adagio, 
My footsteps morph from clomp to skip, 
As shadows lengthen outside; 
I imagine what could be accomplished in this world, 
It cast a long, untiring spell on me, 
By a power I still can’t comprehend, 
I put down the mirror 
Pretty in red, I climb into the folds of bed. 
 Music To My Ears - A Cento - gillena cox 2024

Links for my cento 

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: “A cento is a poem formed from lines of poems written by other poets.
 Latin for ‘patchwork,’ 
the cento is composed like a collage or quilt,
 and honors others’ poems while presenting a unique work. 


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22 comments:

  1. I like how you have combined all these lines into a contemplative journey. Happy that my line fitted in so well :) Well done.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Di

    Much♡love

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  3. Beautifully crafted, Gillena. 💙 I'm pleased you were inspired by my line with all the others.

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  4. Thank you for your appreciation Merril

    Much♡love

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  5. You wove a magical quilt of lines, Gillena, warm and comforting in spite of encroaching chill and shadows. So pleased you could use one of mine to achieve the effect! 💖

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Dora

    Much♡love

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  7. Nicely done, Gillena, with a rhythm that matches the walk, and I love the internal rhyme in ‘Pretty in red, I climb into the folds of bed’.

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    1. That libe is from Sanaa.
      Thank you for your appreciation Kim

      Much♡love

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  8. I love the way you used the lines to portray a lovely walk

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  9. Thank you for your appreciation Björn

    Much♡love

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  10. You took my breath away with this cohesive combination of random lines!!! Love that you chose one of mine***

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Helen

      Much♡love

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  11. Going to sleep to dream about conquering the world! I love the assuredness I read in your poem. (I apologize for not commenting more, for whatever reason, I can only comment on your blog from my laptop.)

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  12. I am so honored, Gillena! Thank you for great use of my line. This is a gorgeously constructed cento 🥰🥰💖

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

      Much♡love

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  13. Gillena, it reads like an enchantment and the beginning of a new adventure.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Lisa

      Much♡love

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  14. My footsteps morph from clomp to skip, ... that line really sets the mood. Love it.

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  15. Thank you for your appreciation Debi

    Much♡love

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  16. So beautiful, Gillena! I love the upbeat write. Thanks so much for including a line from my poem. ❤️

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  17. Thank you for your appreciation Punam

    Much♡love

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