Thursday, March 21, 2024

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[one of my watercolours edited in picsart]
Overlapp
And when cometh the dawn, when she in
Her shadowy aspect of night to day, dare
To sketch such hues and tints, no match wherein
The artist's brush, should either crave or bear;
Who honestly should be jealous of this spin
Dabbling at hours of mystery there.
Perhaps this birth of spurious time is hatched
Only in the illusion of colours overlapped
© gillena cox 2024

BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

Poetry Form: Ottavo Rima or Sonnetto Rispetto/a
rhyme scheme abababcc


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14 comments:

  1. Shirley BMarch 21, 2024 at 6:58 PM

    You handled the form really well and I like how it has a 'medieval' tone to it. Especially love the last 2 lines.

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 22, 2024 at 7:48 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Shirley

      Much♡love

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  2. GraceMarch 21, 2024 at 9:19 PM

    I am envious of the artist brush, creating an illusion of colors and tints in the canvas. You certaintly dabbled a lot of mystery in your art. Thanks for joining in our poetry form challenge.

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  3. rogblog666March 22, 2024 at 3:05 AM

    really enjoyed both the painting and the poem

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  4. kittysversesMarch 22, 2024 at 3:18 AM

    Wow, lovely artwork and poem, Gillena .:)

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 22, 2024 at 7:50 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation kittyverses

      Much♡love

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  5. brudbergMarch 22, 2024 at 4:02 AM

    How lovely dawn can be... and tied to a form like this make it sound eternal

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 22, 2024 at 7:50 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Björn

      Much♡love

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  6. Kim M. RussellMarch 22, 2024 at 4:05 AM

    You captured the language and tone of the medieval sonetto rispetto in your poem, Gillena. I also like your use of enjambment in the second line, and the comparison of dawn’s ‘hues and tints’ to the artist’s brush.

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  7. Gillena CoxMarch 22, 2024 at 7:50 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    Much♡love

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  8. paeansunpluggedMarch 25, 2024 at 3:00 PM

    Beautiful verse and artwork, Gillena! ❤️

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  9. Gillena CoxMarch 25, 2024 at 11:00 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Punam

    Much♡love

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