Tuesday, April 18, 2023

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[Image courtesy dVerse poets pub]

WHICH VIEW

Outside courts inside

Inside courts outside

It is about the view


It is no barrier really

Whether closed or open

Whether curtained or draped


Which side is whichside


The opened window

The winds drifts in

The eyes drift outward


The closed window

Keeping the rainy day out

Bringing the view of raindrops in.

Which View© gillena cox 2023


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17 comments:

  1. What a great way to look at windows--and life--Gillena! Thank you! 💙

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Merril

      Much💖love

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  2. It is all about perspective, isn't it. Very nice write, Gillena.

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

    Much💖love

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  4. What a paradox! Amazing poem, Gillena

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  5. "The eyes drift outward"

    That's a brilliant line, Gillena ~ just lovely!

    Sincerely,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  6. Thanks for your appreciation David

    Much💖love

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  7. I love the way you look at the windows from both sides.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

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  8. I second Bjorn. This was wonderful.

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  9. I like the open better, fresh air if that distant smoke stays up wind.
    ..

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  10. You're right, of course. I doesn't change anything to the view whether the window is open or closed, only our sense of comfort

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  11. Thanks for your appreciation Jane

    Much💖love

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  12. Appreciating the view from both sides of the window!

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  13. Thanks for your appreciation Lynn

    Much💖love

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