GRASPING CLARITY
In static fusion,
confusion merged colour and sound,
loud enough to mini
mize clarity, the one thing
I was trying so hard to
hold on to, in this dream.
Dreams are misunderstood
events; so there i was, petrified,
willing myself awake, from the electrostatic.
© gillena cox 2022
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Excellent use of the word. It makes me think about how I really only prefer day dreams as you can somewhat control them....if not interrupted! :)
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I love "static fusion,
ReplyDeleteconfusion merged colour and sound"--that sounds just like a dream, Gillena!
I've written several poems about dreams recently. 😊
Dreams are so strange... but sometimes you want to keep them i think
ReplyDeleteIndeed so Björn. Some leave a sweet taste you want to savor.
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Happy you dropped by Merril
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The words you use and chose to use really play! All of them full..beautiful description of dreams..
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Ain
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Don't you just love those static dreams the leave you hanging like the end of a season episode on TV ? Great poem. Gillena.
ReplyDelete😊thanks for dropping by Dwight
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I like the double use of the prompt word!
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Gillena - how interesting that you should write about dreams ... I recently had some very vivid dreams, several different ones, and all on the same night. It was bizarre and I had to pull myself out of it! Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!
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Nicely done quadrille
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Hello there my friend! I love reading your post and joining in too. Have a good week! I hope you are well and happy. Hugs, Diane
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Angie
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You never know where a dream will take you!
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I love this, Gillena! You captured so well the truth about dreams.
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I enjoyed reading your thoughts on dreams with interesting choice of words. I think I only remember the ending of a dream which leaves me emotion.
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such a perfect description for dreams, Gillena.
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I like the contrast in form between the first and second stanza - dream and reality?
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Thanks for your appreciation Sara
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"Static Fusion" ~ I love that!
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David [ben Alexander]
http://skepticskaddish.com/
Thanks for your appreciation David
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