Saturday, May 12, 2018

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[IMAGE FROM Bing dot com. Fair Use]


MOONSHINE
Daylight was slowly slipping away,
Shadowed boxes were filled emptiness,
With a wisp a will and way.
Weary trees phantomed night.
Silhouettes were forever whispered sound.
Light of lamp and moon thus bright.

Shine!!

Bright thus moon and lamp of light,
Sound whispered forever were silhouettes.
Night phantomed trees weary.
Way and will a wisp a with.
Emptiness filled were boxes shadowed,
Away slipping slowly was daylight.
MOONSHINE © gillena cox 2018

Blog hopping today with imaginary garden

Fussy Little Forms: Palindrome
Prompted by Marian: Challenged to write Palindrome Poems. [a palindrome is a word or phrase that is the same when read forward or backward. Like WOW...a palindrome poem can read forward and backward word by word or line by line]




Revisit
Most Likely The Moon
Unfettered Moon
Bright Moon

Enjoy The Music

14 comments:

  1. Soo beautiful!💖 Especially love the image "Silhouettes were forever whispered sound."

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Sana

      Much💖love🌸

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    2. Happy you dropped by Kim

      Much💖love🌸

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  2. Oh... really pretty images here. The repetition really emphasizes the mood. Nice!

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    1. Happy you dropped by to read mine Marian

      Much💖love🌸

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  3. Way and will a wisp a with. --- loved how that phrase turned out... almost like a will'o wispe

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Björn

      Much💖love🌸

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  4. Silhouettes were forever whispered sound........love this and the overall imagery.

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  5. Thanks for dropping by Vivian

    Much💖love🌸

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  6. oh loved this....brilliantly done...loved the lines!

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  7. Thanks for dropping by sreeja

    much love...

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  8. Reads very nice, Gillena. I liked the "shadowed boxes" the best. You might try it with 'sounds' rather than 'sound'.
    ..

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  9. Thanks for the C&C Jim, "sounds" reads well also.

    much love...

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