Tuesday, April 17, 2018

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[Wassily Kandinsky - Comet...Google dot com; Fair Use]


COMET
When a comet, swishes her tail like mermaid wishes,
Know that brilliant story of majesty is told.
The one in need of sharing,
Throughout the whole Universe.
To all of life,
Not just for me, not just for you,
But for lamb and lion, fish, bird and leaf
COMET © gillena cox 2018


Revisit
17 April 2017
17 April 2016
...then one star



Blog hopping today with imaginary garden. In April we write a poem every day

The Tuesday Platform ~ April Style
Kerry Oconnor is prompting. Challenge: Open mic with an OPTIONAL extra... the work of 20th Century artist, Wassily Kandinsky... to select an image and WRITE


ENJOY THE MUSIC



This blog remains VERSES but from today in uppercase letters

24 comments:

  1. That's a lovely take on that image!

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  2. Thanks for your appreciation Rajani

    much love...

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  3. A wonderful and magical piece - you really took us into the painting

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Jae

      Much­čî╝love

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  4. I love the swishy sounds in the opening line, Gillena, and the comparison of comet and mermaid.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Kim

      Much­čî╝love

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  5. This is beautiful, Gillena!­čĺ× I love the idea of a comet swishing her tail like mermaid wishes.. sigh..

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

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  6. What a lovely start for my day. I, too, like the comet’s swishing tail,and the thought that “her” gift is for everyone. :-)

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation LC

      Much­čî╝love

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Paul


      Much­čî╝love

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    1. Happy you dropped by Annell

      Much­čî╝love

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  9. I like the way you envisage the universe as a whole. Everything is a part of a bigger picture.

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    1. Thank you for dropping by to read mine Kerry

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  10. This flashes me back to the last comet we could see with the naked eye during the nineties. Magical.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Timoteo


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  11. Opening and closing lines are magical.

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  12. I love the comparison between the comet and the mermaid. I also like that her gift is for all of us.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Toni

      much love...

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    2. Thank you for your appreciation Margaret

      much love...

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  13. Very nice, Gillena. It reminds me of one of my favorite scripture verses, Romans 8:19 "For the creation waits in eager expectation for the children of God to be revealed." That and the verses surrounding I believe are why dogs and cars, a part of God's creation, will be in Heaven when they die.
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  14. (✿◠‿◠) Thank you for your appreciation Jim


    much love...

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