Thursday, September 14, 2017

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image courtesy imaginary garden


STRANGERS
My feet shod in sneakers
[echo] greeters
I walk in glorious sun
[echo] fun
The door of the kiosk says PUSH
[echo] bush
Song birds poem the sky
[echo] high

He is before me in the queue
[echo] who
I wish his eyes were violet
[echo] triolet

Then I could poem him in colour
[echo] dollar
For his thoughts by and by
[echo] Hi
STRANGERS © gillena cox 2017

Blog hopping today with the imaginary garden

of muse and me
Sanaa is prompting

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Revisit
14 September 2016
14 September 2015

17 comments:

  1. This is absolutely delightful, Gillena!❤️ You know I love me some echo verseπŸ˜„ and you have done a beautiful job of it! Thank you so much for participating. Have a lovely day ahead!❤️

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  2. Thanks for dropping in to read mine Sanaa

    much love...

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  3. I love "song birds poem the sky". This was a fun outing to read about.

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Sherry

      much love...

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  4. There is a truth in this, which you turned into fun.

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  5. A happy poem for Friday morning, Gillena!

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    1. Thanks for dropping in Kerry

      much love...

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  7. The echo poetry gets one to think in terms of rhyming all along the way. It'll help make things easier for future episodes!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Hank

      Much 😍 love

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  8. "Song birds poem the sky"

    How I love the surreal magic of that line, Gillena. Just wonderful!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Magaly

      Much 😍 love

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  9. I like your echos, Gillena. First, trio let. was probably my favorite, it sent me to Google. There I found my memory again , remberance it. It was introduced but I don't remember writing one.
    ..

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  10. 'song birds poem the sky'
    Excellent echo poem, Gillena. Love it!

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