Monday, June 5, 2017

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GHOST TOWN
Under eyebrow of day
Shone resplendent sun
Pistols emptied in shells of ray
Vacant the concrete of everyone
Except for snippets of murmuring breeze
Scant this ghost town a forever siesta

Whiffs and wafts clouds looked from above
As phantom counting drought-scars below
Shhh! in ambles quick-draw overcast
And a riddle of bullets of rain
GHOST TOWN © gillena cox 2017

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5 June 2015



10 comments:

  1. Except for snippets of murmuring breeze
    Scant this ghost town a forever siesta......... hauntingly deserted ...!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sreeja

      Much love...

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  2. I like 'Under eyebrow of day' and 'riddled bullets of rain' sigh.. Beautifully executed.

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  3. what a great opening and closing, Gillena ~

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Michael

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  4. Wild West – but gentled with time (and desertion).

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    1. 😊thanks for your appreciation Rosemary

      Much love...

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  5. under eyebrow of day.... Yes, I enjoy ghost walks - at night they are fun and can be eery, but daytime those same places look normal. :)

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