Thursday, March 9, 2017

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[image from google dot com]

the sky is full of clouds today

at the fair i watch the stick fluff out
into pink puffy cotton candy delights

when i tasted morning
the air was still except for
its report of birdsongs
© gillena cox 2017


Blog hopping today with

Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
Synesthesia
Rommy challenges us to: Compose a poem based around personal perceptions of joined sensory experiences.





Revisit
March 9th 2015
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Location: St James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

15 comments:

  1. Sanaa RizviMarch 9, 2017 at 4:30 PM

    Such delicious images here Gillena❤️ love the idea of morning air tasting like bird-songs.. Beautifully penned.

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  2. MargaretMarch 9, 2017 at 4:45 PM

    cotton candy skies and the taste of birdsong... I'm in :)

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  3. Gillena CoxMarch 9, 2017 at 5:44 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Margaret

    Much love...

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  4. RommyMarch 9, 2017 at 6:12 PM

    I haven't had cotton candy in years. Mmm!

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 10, 2017 at 3:00 AM

      Thank you for dropping in to read mine Rommy

      Much love...

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  5. AnonymousMarch 9, 2017 at 7:52 PM

    Your words take me back. Thanks

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  6. Magaly GuerreroMarch 10, 2017 at 12:31 AM

    I closed my eyes and thought of cotton candy flavored dew... then I heard birdsong. So lovely, Gillena.

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    1. Gillena CoxMarch 10, 2017 at 3:02 AM

      Thankf for your appreciation Magaly ☺

      Much love...

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  7. Kim M. RussellMarch 10, 2017 at 3:12 AM

    Good morning, Gillena. I'm not long up and after a bright red sunset, 'the sky is full of clouds today'. Your pink puffy cotton candy has brightened it up! Much love xxx

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  8. kaykualaMarch 10, 2017 at 10:32 AM

    Cotton candy skies a spectacle to be appreciated!

    Hank

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  9. brudbergMarch 10, 2017 at 5:21 PM

    I would love a taste of such sky too... so sweet.

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  10. Gillena CoxMarch 13, 2017 at 8:02 AM

    Thanks for dropping by Björn

    Much love...

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  11. Stacie EirichMarch 18, 2017 at 12:45 PM

    Gillena, this was a luscious prompt & you have brought scrumptious images to it. My favorite, of course, is the birdsong & how you "tasted" the morning. Lovely!

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