Monday, May 9, 2016

Monday WRites 57

[image from google dot com]

What's new? we often ask, when filling gaps;
Expecting in turn, differences, between
Sunsets and sunrises, of yesterday's lapse;
Indeed, life shifts in particles, minute dust,
Ever in motion, thoughts unwind, filling gaps
Words speak, layering over creation's plans;
Nothing is new? only freshly served? perhaps!
Daily bread, consuming hunger, rewarding then
Task of nature, in bountiful kneading, overlaps
Giants are slumping, babies are crying, tis so
Will it ever stop? courage, when filling gaps.
NEW © gillena cox 2016

You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #57, ❧✿❧ Hope you like the new write animation [from google dot com] ❧✿❧Whats your mood like today ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites





  1. Such a thought provoking poem Gillena especially in awe of "Nothing is new? only freshly served? perhaps!" Beautifully executed.

    PS: I can't find mr linky, here is my link ( )

  2. Sanaa the same thing happened yesterday at Lunch Break, i put in the code for the Linky yet it didnt appear, Thanks for alerting me. It is corrected and you link is in

    Thanks for participating

    much love...

  3. Wow what a fabulous poem to ponder....I really loved the ending....such hope as I need it now!


  4. Thanks for linking in Donna

    much love...

  5. What's new
    A carpet of petals beneath
    The leafy cherry tree

  6. Mike, thanks for dropping in to share you Monday mood with this beautiful haiku

    much love...