Monday, February 15, 2016

Monday WRites 48

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MORNING
Canopy of morning, the stars rest now
In a cloud tinted pink, the marquee states morning
Feathered heralds from every bough,
Have a say in democratic parlance, to shape the day
Courage paints the sun rays radiant, the stars rest now
Once i stood, handbag shouldered, with lunch brown bagged
To the echo of honking horns streaming somehow
Issues of bread and butter salt, garlic and theater
Back then everyone was going through the door to allow
Empty houses to sleep, dream, and wait the din of returning
Morning, i while away in poesy, as the stars rest now
MORNING © gillena cox 2016


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You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #48, ❧✿❧ Whats your mood like today ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites
Today's poem is a Fold.



GRAB MY BUTTON

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Will link this to this week's open mic at
The Tuesday Platform
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

18 comments:

  1. Well written!
    Good morning and have a blessed day

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  2. In a cloud tinted pink, the marquee states morning
    Feathered heralds from every bough,

    That's a lovely image :D have a wonderful week ahead!
    Beautifully executed.


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

      much love...

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  3. The repeated line brings an order and form to the morning described. It's a nice cozy sort of feeling, waiting for the day's business to start.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Tommy

      Much love...

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  4. Clever, the pink resting place for the stars.
    ..

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Jim

      Much love...

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  5. Have a nice week and lovely mornings.

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  6. Upbeat and positive! Have a wonderful day!

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  7. This is a wonderful image:

    Back then everyone was going through the door to allow
    Empty houses to sleep, dream, and wait the din of returning

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    1. Thanks for dropping in Kerry

      Much love...

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  8. There should always be such softness in morning.. to let the stars go gently to sleep... I wish you many such mornings.

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  9. I like the idea of the stars resting as we get on with our day.

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    1. Thanks for dropping in to read mine Bekkie
      Much love...

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