Wednesday, February 3, 2016

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Pink Poui trees from google dot com


BRIGHTER
About to bite into delicious sweet
The pinks of poui brighter than any day
With sloping hillsides gentle passing
And scent of wildflowers a mixed potpourri
Ha! cupcakes of dreams are never real
Sunlight though, streams in from morning
BRIGHTER © gillena cox 2016

written for Kerry O'Connor's
The Tuesday Platform
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
where is shared, a moving recital of La Belle Dame Sans Merci by Ben Wishaw , from the movie Bright Star, a bio pic based on the last three years of John Keats' life

8 comments:

  1. I always love your descriptions of nature. Such a great final line too.

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    1. Thanks for dropping in to read mine Kerry

      Much love...

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  2. I feel transported to a warmer place,..

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    1. Happy you dropped in Bjorn

      Much love...

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    1. Thanks for dropping in to read mine Susie

      Much love...

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  4. A very pretty poem, Gillena. k.

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