PROCESS SURREAL
He’s the madman, slicing off an ear,
Spoiling his metaphor,
Charts a sentence through the valley
Of amore
Flays arms and heart in rhythmic stupor
And for what?
The juxtaposition of a simile perfect;
All’s for nought, and nought but dread,
This creature like Andromeda chained,
Not to jagged rock, or torture pole,
Bounded though, to inertia where,
Gravity tells no tale orated to,
The weightlessness of words.
Words Count with Mama Zen
from the inspiration of Jean Cocteau's first film The Blood of a Poet (1930) to write a poem in less than 80 words
Guess I have the honor of being #!. You certainly captured the surrealistic spirit of the prompt clip, pulling us along over a verbose landscape of macabre verbiage & denizens of crying angel statues (DOCTOR WHO reference). I like the lines /charts a sentence through the valley/of amore/. Writing can be all things, but it may never constitute no-thing.
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The weight of weightlessness.. Only madmen and poets would know I think,
ReplyDeleteFor sure Bjorn, for sure
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Really cool, Gillena. I like the Van Gogh reference.
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Words are weightless, to a degree, but can deliver a powerful blow, as this poem shows.
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I love the way you open with the ear...I thought about Picasso, too and I like how you don't mention his name. Nice work, Gillena!
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You've capture surreal perfectly. "Charts a sentence through the valley of amore" Love that line!
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'and for what' - the eternal question of poets, yes? ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in to read mine Grapeling
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Oh I love this π especially 'Flays arms and heart in rhythmic stupor. And for what? The juxtaposition of a simile perfect' π
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