Monday, April 6, 2015

Monday WRites - 6

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You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea).
Welcome to Monday WRites #6; whats your mood today ❧✿❧ my poem today is a cinquain; 2.4.6.8.2 syllable form ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites
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the stars
are far away yes
my grand child told me so
she is just two going on three
sweetheart
© gillena cox

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I Wrote in response to the prompt today at
Poems In April Seeing Stars - Sixth Day of National Poetry Month
Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

oh and i luvvvvv this, hope you enjoy ❧✿❧ HAPPY EASTER MONDAY



36 comments:

  1. I love to see the world through the eyes of a child.

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    1. surely a wealth of innocence which draws us back to a reality that oh so necessary at times; thanks for dropping by Sherry

      much love...

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  2. So, so cute! I love the simple, clarity of observation.

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  3. Very pretty poem, lovely close. k. (Manicddaily)

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  4. Their observations are so wonderful. Grandkids are special people.

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  5. What a delectable cinquain - like its inspiration, I'm sure.

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  6. Very sweet, Gillena :)
    Loved the song too; had heard the Don McLean version but not this one. :)

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  7. They say the most obvious things and then I think, Oh! Yeah! Of course. Why didn't I think of that?

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  8. This is absolutely exquisite!!
    xoxo

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  9. Sweet!
    All things are learned anew when children are around.

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    1. Surely surely, Thanks for dropping in Cami

      much love...

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  10. This makes me smile! What a sweetheart~

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  11. Sweet poem and song.
    Have a blessed week

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  12. The beauty of the world as seen by a child is priceless.

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    1. indeed Susie, thanks for dropping in

      much love...

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