Thursday, December 4, 2014

Moments Of Blooming


image from google dot com

there is an old house, it leans somewhat
what tales abound from this quaint hut
you can hear voices from centuries old but
only if you just listen

in the cool night air the scent of aromatic trees
fill spaces between shadow and filtering breeze
a night when a song blossoms with such ease
before dewdrops glisten
--gillena cox




written for the challenge at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads - Bits Of Inspiration ~ Queen Of The Night
... the challenge to write about those precious moments of blooming. It could be a flower, an experience, a person...(occuring in the night hours).

Imaginary Garden With Real Toads

16 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed this image and your poem. I love the cadence of it, well crafted, not easily done. It is lovely and I can picture the scene and smell " the scent of aromatic trees"

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Ellecee

    Much love...

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  3. I like this scene a lot. The old house sounds quite intriguing.

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  4. The things we would hear and see if we only let our senses (and heart) do what they are meant to do. ♥

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  5. To listen to those stories that abound that quaint hut ~ Specially like that song that blossoms with such ease ~

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  6. Happy you dropped in Justin

    Much love...

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  7. Happy you dropped in Magaly

    Much love...

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  8. Thank you for your appreciation Grace

    Much love...

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  9. Happy you dropped in Karen

    Much love...

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  10. Nothing more enchanting than a song being born. This is a lovely piece. Thanks so much for writing for the challenge.

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  11. Very nice, Gillena. I liked picturing the old hut and imagining the sounds and scents.

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  12. Thank you for your appreciation Susie

    Much love...

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  13. Thank you for your appreciation Jennifer

    Much love...

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  14. Beautiful. I especially like the last couple of lines.

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