Monday, April 10, 2023

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Wishing all a Happy Season of Easter

BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
Prosery: Valsa George-“The Accidental Poet”
Given the line The seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart.  to use in a prose not more than 144 words

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THE VERY RIGHT MOMENT
The seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart. I always wanted to hear those enduring words spoken softly like the twilight. 

And here were we; candlelight and wine. And we eye to eye, misting up the moment.

This is when the words whirrled  around in my head. He was swirling his wine, sniffing it before he drank I held my glass, watching him.
THE VERY RIGHT MOMENT#flash fiction
© gillena cox 2023


Mosaic Monday 26

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This is Monday WRites 3902
You've heard about the Monday Blues 
well this is Monday WRites  (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance for eg the rite of afternoon tea). 
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26 comments:

  1. ~Lavender Dreamer~April 10, 2023 at 1:42 PM

    How beautiful. Have a blessed week my friend, Diane

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  2. Kim M. RussellApril 10, 2023 at 3:40 PM

    A romantic story, Gillena, The line lends itself as an opening, and I love the idea of ‘words spoken softly like the twilight’.

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  3. ms_liliApril 10, 2023 at 3:41 PM

    You described that moment so well, where the word stands still except for you two.

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  4. MishApril 10, 2023 at 4:07 PM

    Concise and strong. I love this capture of romance.

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  5. Gillena CoxApril 10, 2023 at 4:22 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Mish.

    much💖love

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  6. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comApril 10, 2023 at 7:03 PM

    A lovely romantic scene!

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  7. Gillena CoxApril 10, 2023 at 7:33 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lillian

    much💖love

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  8. TriciaApril 10, 2023 at 10:18 PM

    Love this flash of a moment that is seeded with romance! 🍷

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  9. Gillena CoxApril 10, 2023 at 11:09 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Tricia

    much💖love

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  10. Dwight L. RothApril 10, 2023 at 11:17 PM

    A very nice story, Gillena. He's swirling the wine while you are swirling words in your head!

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    1. Gillena CoxApril 11, 2023 at 1:44 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Dwight

      much💖love

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  11. robkistnerApril 10, 2023 at 11:59 PM

    Hi Gillena… Happy (______________) — fill in the blank with whatever you are celebrating this time of year. Nice writing my friend… Salut! 👍🏼🙂✌🏼🫶🏼

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  12. Gillena CoxApril 11, 2023 at 1:44 AM

    Hi Rob Thanks for dropping by. Having a happy Season of Easter right up until Pentecost Sunday in May

    Much💖love

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  13. sarahApril 11, 2023 at 2:30 AM

    Lovely - I want to know what happened next! There's a sense of everything beginning, of potential.

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  14. Paul John DearApril 11, 2023 at 11:51 AM

    Romantic take on the prompt...all a swirl.

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  15. EricaStaApril 14, 2023 at 1:25 PM

    Thank you for being part, dear Gillena
    of
    MosaicMonday

    with this lovely post.
    Heidrun

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  16. Merril D. SmithApril 15, 2023 at 6:35 AM

    Lovely and romantic, Gillena! ❤️

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  17. A Bit of the BlarneyApril 17, 2023 at 2:33 PM

    So very lovely! Wishing you a lovely week! Thank you for your visits to my "hourse." Cathy

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  18. Gillena CoxApril 17, 2023 at 3:16 PM

    Thanks for dropping by Cathy

    Much💖love

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