Quadrille - Coax
Who coaxed the stars from my night sky
And left a blanket of charcoal cloud
Were not i
The one who sang aloud
Soca songs for party days
To liven mood swings oft
And psalms fit for church ways
Seemingly not enough.
My stars!
© gillena cox 2025
Challenge: to write a quadrille given word coax
Here in Trinidad and Tobago🇹🇹 we celebrate 100 days of Christmas starting 23rd Sepember to 25th December; hosted by Sweet 101.1 FM Radio, where our local Christmas music is featured
ENJOY THE MUSIC


I can’t resist a star quadrille, Gillena, and this one is lovely.
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Gillena if the soca music doesn't bring them back, I don't know what will. I love the idea of having a 100 day celebration!
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Beautifully expressed! (And yes, sometimes there is really nothing we can do – except write.)
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Nice use of the prompt, Gillena!
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Go away charcoal cloud, and come back stars! Delightful, Gillena! 🌟 💙
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation, Merril
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Beautiful, I really loved the ending!
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And left a blanket of charcoal cloud...what a line!! Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation, Di
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That dark blanket of clouds stealing the stars is so dark... but they will come back for you
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation, Björn
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Gillena, your quadrille is exceptional!!!
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