Tuesday, April 16, 2024

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an image created for me at Bing AI;

 Tell Me

What would i do without you bird song?

You; clock of the dawn so well sung


Where would i have been this morning?

Had i not opened a window to let God's breath gently filter in


It is the stuff of mundane things;

Like the eyelids in blinking,


That makes for a wondrous chink  

Understanding of energy don't you think?

© gillena cox 2024

BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

A poem of address is a poetic form that allows the poet to “speak” to a subject.
 Most of the time the subject doesn’t talk back because it’s a person who isn’t with the poet, 
or because the person is no longer living, 
or because the subject can’t talk back because it is an animal, 
a place, or a thing so this type of poem is usually in the form of a monologue.

REVISIT TO READ

12 comments:

  1. Gorgeous! And yes, I agree, "It is the stuff of mundane things." Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt, Gillena 💖💖

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  2. Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much♡love

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  3. I love that you wrote about songbirds ... they serenade me very early in the morning here ... around 4:30 and I am immediately happy.

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  4. Thanks for your appreciation Helen

    Much♡love

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  5. Your mornings are always so blessed with joy. Simply love it.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Björn

      Much♡love

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  6. What a lovely way to start the day, Gillena! I love the phrase ‘clock of the dawn so well sung’.

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  7. Love the bird songs at dawn. Beautiful way to start the day.

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  8. Thanks for your appreciation Grace

    Much♡love

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