Wise And Wanton: a Fold
Lets bridge the ocean with rays,
Curved as reflections of the rain;
Lets write a fairy tale in the ways
Seekers hope for more treasure,
Then span ripples of ocean with rays;
Timely and memorable like history,
Colourful and garish like those days
When everything goes haywire;
And only words spoken can phrase,
Intentions for solutions to end mayhem;
Then connect across ocean with rays
© gillena cox 2023
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Wouldn't that be nice. Nice write, I kept on using "rags" instead of 'rays'. Dunno why.
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Thanks for dropping by Jim
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Very nicely done, Gillena.
DeleteI can feel those rays as they show a bridge across the sea
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Björn
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I love the image of the curved, reflected rays. Lovely fold poem, Gillena! 💙
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Merril
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I liked, "Intentions for solutions to end mayhem." The next line seems to imply to me that it is necessary to find some kind of transcendent wisdom to find those solutions.
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Love your 'fold' format.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Reena
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I missed writing to the "fold" form, Gillena. Will definitely attempt it one of these days.
ReplyDeleteA lovely write. Thanks for joining in. 💙
Thanks for your appreciation Punam
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