Late dawn, under a clearing sky,
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I listen to bird whistles in my backyard.
Orange streaks, and linings silver, why,
There is every reason to gasp.
For morning has reached a clearing sky.
Hope smiles as moon lingers;
Orbits imagination to another try,
At authorship of cloud ocean and forest.
Wheels of toil, how they grind oh my.
Continuation whirls like everlasting;
To new day, under a clearing sky,
© gillena cox 2023
NOTE
How to construct The Fold Poem HERE
and HERE
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And a beautiful day it is, with those bird whistles.
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A wonderful poem of finding joy and peace where you are... in your own back yard.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Dwight
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You fold your repeating lines in so they conclude just right. I am thinking of the song, "Morning Has Broken."
ReplyDeleteAh yes i luv that song. Thanks for your appreciation Lisa
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Hope and the Moon give a push for this new day to be very nice. Expectations help also.
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Thanks for your appreciation Jim
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"Orbits imagination to another try" what an awesome line!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Jay
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To have all that in one's backyard...total bliss!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Punam
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There is a beautiful melody to your words, Gillena! It matches the beautiful blue sky :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Ingrid
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You describe a place that for many of us would be a paradise
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Björn
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"Morning has reached a clearing sky" ~~~ I love this vivid description most in your beautiful poem.
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I so love the rhythm and cadence in this one, Gillena! Especially; "Hope smiles as moon lingers." 🥰🥰
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