Monday, July 22, 2019

Monday WRites 215


Today's mosaic is titled 'July Past' and is made up of past July images posted at my blog Lunch Break.
to see the first postings visit
patterns of light passion pink petals painting

MORNING CUES
A spontaneous pattern of sunlight
Shadows paint on the ground
Forms indeed an intricate sight
It is morning they surround
But then came the thunder sound

And then it rained and rained
A curtain of raindrops well trained
Was now set to the window view
Not to be drawn there as if chained
Awaiting the next of morning cue
MORNING CUES © gillena cox 2019

You've heard about the Monday Blues ❧✿❧ well this is Monday WRites (musing on the definition here of rite, as any customary observance or practice eg the rite of afternoon tea). A Happy Monday to all
Welcome to Monday WRites #215 ❧✿❧ What's your mood like today ❧✿❧ I invite you to link in with one of your WRites.


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Blog Hopping today with

Mosaic Monday
#37: Pottering, Patience and Poppies


AND


Ruby Tuesday
Sizzling Sun


AND

Poetry Form Dizain

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REVISIT
22 July 2015


ENJOY THE MUSIC



paper boats

24 comments:

  1. Wonderful Mosaic with lyric... happy MosaicMonday

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  2. Hello, beautiful flowers and images. A lovely mosaic! Enjoy your day, wishing you a great new week!

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  3. Thanks for dropping by Eileen

    Much✏❤✏love

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  4. Your mosaic brings memories of our visits to the Caribbean....I can almost smell the flowers!

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  5. Thanks for your appreciation Sallie

    Much✏❤✏love

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  6. Love your mosaic and always enjoy your poems! Have a good week sweet lady!

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  7. I especially like the paper boats!

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Janice

      Much✏❤✏love

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  8. Lovely poem, Gillena. Somehow it feels joyous even when the rain arrives. It is rhymed perfectly for the dizain, but most lines (all but the first) are short of the 10 syllables. 🙁

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    1. Thanks for the critique. Rosemary. This one was my first. Have to practise writing more in this form

      Much✏❤✏love

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  9. Gillena - your poem is evocative of summer - sun and rain and waiting for the next day to dawn! Thanks for linking to Mosaic Monday!

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  10. Happy you dropped by Angie

    Much❤✏❤love

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  11. I like those well trained raindrops awaiting morning's cue.

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  12. Thanks for your appreciation Frank

    Much ✏❤✏love

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  13. Mmmm, morning cues, love it, Gillena. Your poem, the images, and the thought that the morning has only begun. :-)

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  14. Thanks for your appreciation Susiee

    Much ✏❤✏love

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  15. A lot of attention is paid to sunlight and the weather but not so much to daylight shadows and the weather. I like the idea and composition of your dizain, Gillena.
    Jade Li @http://tao-talk.com

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  16. Happy you dropped by Jade

    Much✏❤✏love

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  17. Not to be drawn there as if chained
    Awaiting the next of morning cue

    Great composite Gillena. if it can be drawn easily then it reflects a strong creative
    mind for which not many are endowed with!

    Hank

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  18. Thank you for your appreciation Hank

    Much❤✏❤love

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