PIZZA! - A FOLD
Really, it was just one of those days;
The sky was blue, the clouds fluffy;
Dark clouds however, have their sneaky ways;
They creep into your bones, instead of the sky;
Lethargy without reason, fill those days;
Sighs: long, lingering and repeated out breaths;
Jostle space; in an air, sunlight, sadness,, maze;
A tiny idea zooms larger and larger, make a pizza!
Yummy! some solutions are so simple for those days
PIZZA! © gillena cox 2020
NOTE
How to construct The Fold Poem
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and HERE
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Some simple solutions bring complex comfort, indeed.
ReplyDeleteGreat when troubles are fixable with pizza!
ReplyDelete😊happy you dropped by Rosemary
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Pizza is definitely the way to go!! Love this, Gillena!💝
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Sanaa
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I wager pizza will fix almost anything that needs fixing! Cheers.
ReplyDelete😊thanks for dropping by Helen
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Those dark clouds really can enter your bones. Pizza is always a delicious remedy!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Lori
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Ah! Food the panacea for all ills!
ReplyDelete😊Thanks for dropping by Robin
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You should have put how to make a pizza as well as a fold poem LOL
ReplyDelete😊 thanks for dropping by Rall.
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Pizza...It can bring one out of the dark clouds.
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Susie
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This is such a friendly, chatty poem, Gillena, and so matter of fact with ‘Really, it was just one of those days’, and then the tone changes with the dark clouds creeping into bones ‘instead of the sky’. I like the way you conveyed the feelings of lethargy in the ‘long, lingering and repeated out breaths’. And then you solved the problem with pizza!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Kim
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I love all your steps and feelings that build until the Great Pizza Idea!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Sara
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