Wednesday, February 3, 2016

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DOT
There are these pages in a book
Each page is dotted
Creative little hands join these dots
To a reward of surprise
Often times questioning
What is that?
When the last two dots are connected
Look! See what i have a made
A new creation, (that was already there)
Like stars in the Milky Way
DOT © gillena cox 2016


Written for Sumana's prompt
Midweek motif ~ Identity
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Location: St James, Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago

32 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 3, 2016 at 3:48 PM

    I really like "a new creation, like stars in the milky way."

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 3, 2016 at 5:15 PM

      Thanks for dropping in to read mine Sherry

      Much love...

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  2. Sanaa RizviFebruary 3, 2016 at 4:11 PM

    This is lovely Gillena :D I agree with Sherry that last line is superb :D
    Beautifully done :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. SusanFebruary 3, 2016 at 6:20 PM

    And that's how constellations are made! Discovering God's dot to dot drawing book in nature! Love this.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:15 AM

      Thanks for dropping in to read mine Susan

      Much love...

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  4. Old EggFebruary 3, 2016 at 7:18 PM

    Life is all about joining the dots and becoming part of the whole yourself. What a fascinating post Gillena.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:16 AM

      Thanks for dropping in to read mine Robin

      Much love...

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  5. MaryFebruary 3, 2016 at 7:25 PM

    Indeed...your poem expresses identity in a unique way, Gillena.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:17 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Mary

      Much love...

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  6. TruedessaFebruary 3, 2016 at 8:29 PM

    First, I knew I would like this as soon as I saw the picture. I think we are really just dots in the vast universe but, each of us a new unique creation.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:17 AM

      Thanks for your appreciation Trudessa

      Much love...

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2016 at 9:29 PM

    A new creation that was already there.. profound!

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:18 AM

      Happy you dropped in to read mine Thotpurge

      Much love...

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  8. Sumana RoyFebruary 4, 2016 at 2:40 AM

    "A new creation, (that was already there)" the more we delve into this the more amazed we are...I love the spiritual note of this line...

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:19 AM

      Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

      Much love...

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  9. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 4, 2016 at 6:45 AM

    Lovely! Deceptively light; really deep.

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  10. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 8:13 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Rosemary

    much love...

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  11. rudraprayagaFebruary 4, 2016 at 8:21 AM

    I liked the view esp.'Creative little hands join these dots
    To a reward of surprise'.

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  12. Jae RoseFebruary 4, 2016 at 9:27 AM

    It's the simple pleasures and discoveries that make us glow :)

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 4, 2016 at 9:27 AM

    Aha. That's how we identify: by connecting the dots. Wise and witty.
    -HA

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  14. Myrna R.February 4, 2016 at 12:04 PM

    Love this Gillena. We participate in creation as we connect the dots of our true identity. Great writing!

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:57 PM

      Thanks for dropping in to read mine Myrna

      Much love...

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 4, 2016 at 1:39 PM

    Often the last two dots are the hardest to connect.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 4, 2016 at 5:58 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation Maggie

      Much love...

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  16. rallentandaFebruary 6, 2016 at 10:43 AM

    Connecting the dots is difficult.

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    1. Gillena CoxFebruary 7, 2016 at 11:30 AM

      Happy you dropped in to read mine Rall

      Much love...

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  17. moondustwriterFebruary 9, 2016 at 9:08 PM

    Ahhh the childlike wonder of connecting the dots and celestial discoveries. It is hopefully what we can experience of life and others. A delight to lighten the day, Gillena.

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  18. Gillena CoxFebruary 10, 2016 at 8:01 AM

    Leslie, I'm happy you dropped in to read mine

    Much love...

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