image courtesy imaginary garden with real toads
IN LOVELY GRENADA
the lashes of my eyes flicker with thoughts of hot sand
hot sand scorching my mind to savour the insoles of feet
of feet trending from a skimpy bikini, its string tying my navel
tying my navel to the gentle rippling waves of Grand Anse
Grand Anse beach where i'll sit under a big hat
a big hat which hides my birth scar when i visit on vacation
© gillena cox
Ella's challenge for us today - to take the place where you were born-the state, the providence, the country-whatever you prefer and add the richness of this area to your poem.
“The “Kumulipo” is an old Hawaiian prayer chant that poetically describes the creation of the world. The word literally means “beginning-in-deep-darkness.” Here darkness doesn’t connote gloom and evil. Rather, it’s about the inscrutability of the embryonic state; the obscure chaos that reigns before germination.”
O ke au i kahuli wela ka honua
O ke au i kahuli lole ka lani
O ke au i kukaŹ»iaka ka la
O ke au o Makali'i ka po...
In English:
At the time when the earth became hot
At the time when the heavens turned about
At the time when the sun was darkened
To cause the moon to shine...
What a beautiful place filled with warmth to gather inspiration.. wonderful.. Love the shade in the sun..
ReplyDeleteYou make me crave the sand, the sea and the soulful sun~
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in Ella
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I love the style that you used in this poem Gill. The repetition almost sounds lyrical because I swear I've heard a song whose lyrics use a similar form.
ReplyDeleteHow I would love to be on a beach in Cancun right now.
Your poem is so inviting.
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Thank you for your appreciation Kenn
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Thanks Debi and happy you left your link; i will stop over to read yours
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interesting device with the repetition
ReplyDeleteand you make some unexpected turns
nicely done
cheers
jzb
the earth can give so much inspiration
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Jazz
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Happy you dropped in rosebud
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I love the echoing effect of the repetition - it cause the feel of waves rolling in as well. Great writing, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteInnovative repeats that keep us reined in on the setting. Lots of good scenes for inspiration. Great lines Gillena!
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Thank you for your appreciation Hannah
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Thank you for your appreciation Hank
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What a lovely place to find your muse
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in Susan
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You transported me from winter to the beach! Beautiful, Gillena.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Sherry
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All this on a "flicker". Love that.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Margaret
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