Thursday, August 8, 2024

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 Asking Sara

You have crossed over

Is there enough ink

To scribe the journey

Was it plain sailing

To the other realm

Sincerely asking

Are your words with you

So are you writing


Sunsets are golden

Morning comes again

We are not angry

Your words enlighten

Avid poets sway

mystery beholden

Ink here is flowing

You  there are resting

© gillena cox 2024

BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH

 today’s prompt to write an Octameter – designed by Shelley A. Cephas in 2007
Poetry Style:

16 lines
2 stanzas of 8 lines each
5 syllables per line
rhyme scheme a/b/c/d/e/d/f/d; g/h/c/g/i/g/d/d.
(N.B. watch out for those repeat rhymes and where they fall; 2 in the first stanza and 3 in the second stanza)
Poetry Topic: There is no set theme but if you wish to try and write in the style of Sara Teasdale or dedicate a poem to her, with or without epigraph,


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14 comments:

  1. Nicely done, Gillena, I love the questions in the first stanza, especially ‘Is there enough ink to scribe the journey’ to the other side, and the answers in the here and now in the second stanza, with those golden sunsets and flowing ink.

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  2. What a fresh and unexpected direction to have taken this prompt, Gillena...

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Frewin

      much♡love

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  3. I especially like, "Is there enough ink to scribe the journey?" 💙 Lovely thoughts, Gillena.

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Merril

      much♡love

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  4. I like your conversation across the veil, Gillena.

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  5. This is lovely, Gillena. I enjoyed this take.

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  6. A very peaceful and melodic poem.❤

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation Melissa

    much♡love

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