Sunrise to Sunset
When sky plays her colour notes silent yet unyielding.
I bask in the magic of awakening
Here a hint of pink, a dash of yellow
And moon in her shapely forms looking on
There is music at sunset sky too,
The birds sing there roosting strains
There very own sweet goodbyes
Like the Soca melodies of my Trini people.
Some tend to be
Bold brassy and compelling.Others exciting as goodbyes often are
Sunrise to Sunset © gillena cox 2024
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challenge: use a fragment from a poem to write a new poem
Gillena, I love how the drama of color and music shades the fragments (old and new) each in their turn. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Dora
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I have started to understand how dawn and dusk appeals especially to you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Björn
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I especially enjoy these lines: "Here a hint of pink, a dash of yellow
ReplyDeleteAnd moon in her shapely forms looking on
There is music at sunset sky too"
Thank you for your appreciation Melissa
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You stitched together a lovely, lovely work of art, Gillena!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Helen
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A worthy expansion of the lines into a full poem - beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Frewin
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Gillena, I really enjoy how you tune in to nature.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Lisa
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You had me from that beautiful first line!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Sara
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