Thursday, June 13, 2024

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Sunrise to Sunset

When sky plays her colour notes silent yet unyielding.
I bask in the magic of awakening
Here a hint of pink, a dash of yellow
And moon in her shapely forms looking on 
There is music at sunset sky too,  
The birds sing there roosting strains
There very own sweet goodbyes
Like the Soca melodies of my Trini people. 
Some tend to be
Bold brassy and compelling.
Others exciting as goodbyes often are
Sunrise to Sunset © gillena cox 2024


BLOG HOPPING TODAY WITH
challenge:  use a fragment from a poem to write a new poem


REVISIT TO READ
20230613(fragment taken from here)

14 comments:

  1. Gillena, I love how the drama of color and music shades the fragments (old and new) each in their turn. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Dora

      much♡love

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  2. I have started to understand how dawn and dusk appeals especially to you.

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  3. Thank you for your appreciation Björn

    much♡love

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  4. I especially enjoy these lines: "Here a hint of pink, a dash of yellow
    And moon in her shapely forms looking on
    There is music at sunset sky too"

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Melissa

      much♡love

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  5. You stitched together a lovely, lovely work of art, Gillena!!!

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  6. Thank you for your appreciation Helen

    much♡love

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  7. A worthy expansion of the lines into a full poem - beautiful...

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Frewin

      much♡love

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  8. Gillena, I really enjoy how you tune in to nature.

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  9. Thank you for your appreciation Lisa

    much♡love

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  10. You had me from that beautiful first line!

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  11. Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    much♡love

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